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I remember the first time I met her
a tower of books tucked under her chin
glasses sliding down her nose
that she wiggled like a hare's

I helped her carry the tower
to her brother's truck
him ever so persistent to return home
and her just happy to escape into literature

she slumped into the seat
the tower resting at her bare toes
she stuck out her hand
and told me her name

and laughed at the common of it

she would be a freshman after summer
same as me
her brother still urgent
had the engine roar to life

and drive away

her hand waving at me
with a broad smile bubbling over
that danced for me
and all I could think was

Love at first sight is real.
"Katelin, you're going to be a heart breaker some day." Who knew that he'd be right?

This is the story I wrote of meeting my now ex-boyfriend in his point of view. We used to visit our town's library and lay in the garden behind the building reading old poetry with rotted edges, and fairy tales of princes and princesses getting a forever after. We were laying together one day on the blanket I kept there when he rolled over and told me from since he met me he has always loved me.

Thanks for reading! Sorry for inactivity lately, I blame the terrible, terrible subject of Geometry, Algebra 2, and cross country races for being M.I.A!! Love you all!
-xoxo Katelin
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LivingDreamer97 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so good!! Squee!!
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BigBrownEyes13 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013
wow this is really good...
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one-rosy-cheek Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012
You're style of writing carries such a strong air. So charming, I love it.
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BathroomStallStories Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you so much! I'm posting a new piece today! :D
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NotenSMSK Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Quite a different work since it is written from the perspective of your boyfriend rather than you yourself. Well I personally think that it is not love that happens at first sight ^^; it is just some attraction to know the other person but that might be me :)

The story is quite a fleeting one. To me it was like the short moment of meeting someone you like but will probably never see again. Over all it gave a nice wibe. And I also thought that you were writing it as a girl so it sounded less Romantic but more sweet (friendship sweetness).
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BathroomStallStories Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you! I'm posting a new piece today so keep an eye out for it! :)thanks again :D
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NotenSMSK Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I did look at it :D although a bit late ^^; would love if you can look at my latest one as well :D although I wonder when you would be online again :XD:
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BathroomStallStories Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Student Writer
I have finals coming up so I barely get on xD but thanks again for everything!! :)
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NotenSMSK Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Ah well, I am ultra busy as well so I can understand your predicament but... my predicament is tougher than yours! :D not to challenge you or anything ^^; just had to say that :B
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lovelyfraise Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012
Beautiful! *-*
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